Sunday 18 November 2012

A Poem about Senses

Here is another poem I wrote for our big writing last Friday at school. Our topic was senses and so we had to write a poem about our sense of smell - I hadn't thought about my sense of smell too much as its something that is always there. In this poem we had to use alliteration and some more good "wow" words.

I hope you like it!

Thank you for all my nose can smell,
fresh cut grass and pretty bluebells!
The salty sea and sweet honey,
the delicious pasta I ate for my tea.

I love the smell of freshly cut bread, 
my daddy makes when I'm in bed.
The fragrant candles my mummy lights,
The smoky smell of frosty nights.

Thank you for my sense of smell,
Thank you for my nose as well.

Copyright: Betsy Lou 2012


  1. Love your poem. We're new to blogging too. Oscar from thebloggingbrothers

  2. Thanks Oscar! I am coming to visit your blog.

  3. your Poems are brilliant, I don't think I cant write ones better!!!!!!!!!!!


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